To: Brady Alicia
Post: Marvin Gaye
I loved how detailed you were in explaining how Marvin Gaye got into music, as well as his relationship with his father. These details are very crucial in the outcome of his career and, ultimately, his life. It’s significant to mention that you explained in great detailed many of the events that lead to his music career and ended the discussion at one of the most important points of his career. Although I believe that the facts leading up to “What’s Going On” are significant, I also feel that this post could have explained in a bit more detail what exactly the album discussed. “What’s Going On” was a huge part of Marvin Gaye’s career, so I feel that you could have possibly elaborated a bit more on that topic. Overall, it was a very easy, interesting read!
Jaquese Doris Powell 